Annotate.
For my contents design I have tried to keep a theme flowing from the front page to this page, the back ground colour is the same and the cartoon 'suns' have remained a predominant focus. I thought what I was going to advertise on the contents page and I think that I have thought well about what students WANT to know about as pose to giving them information that they don't want to read about. I have tried to keep it young and entertaining. I think that to improve this page, I would make it busier and more like a scrap book as i feel that this will make the page more visually pleasing.

Hannah - you have got on well - consider these ideas and post a reply:
ReplyDelete1 where did you get the background for cover and contents from? or have I missed this?
2 say what software you used for both pages - it would be nice to use InDesign for the contents so you can do some column manipulation - make this an aim
3 your cover should have mid close-up - you found a model which was pretty close to this but your chosen image was more distant - explain the choice
4 the writing on the music mags - separate this by heading or move it to elsewhere in the blog so it is clearly to do with the main task