What People Thought Of My Rough Plan

When I asked a selection of students from Parkwood sixth form to give their opinions on my rough plan for my music magazine. These are the results:

1/10     thought that…            The headlines were unrealistic

2/10     thought that…            It was plain

3/10     thought that…            The colours were boring

4/10     thought that…            The colours were wrong

5/10     thought that…            It was to busy

6/10     thought that…            The act was unbelievable

7/10     thought that…            The headlines were good

8/10     thought that…            The picture was uninteresting

9/10     thought that…            The act was believable